Poem for imaginarygardens and adasofsunny “Fibonnaci” and “Sunshine”
a
drop
a drop
glorious
amber clarity
falling aslant on dusty trees
awaking the rooster, “get up, get up, start this day”
he demands then preens himself in sun’s warm rays of buttercup hues of daffodil days
ah, summer you tumble from skies of radiant blue
I take your hand and twirl with you
an early morning
blessed with drops
amber
tinged
gems
Whistles!!! 😀 oh my goodness Debi this is so very beautiful! I am literally in awe of your fantastic execution of the Fibonnaci form 😀 thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights.
Lots of love,
Sanaa
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Thanks Sanaa
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Gorgeous!
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This is magic, Debi!! I love this line:
” summer you tumble from skies of radiant blue”
the entirety feels like a generous dance!
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Thank you Hannah
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Ah, perfect couplet!!
ah, summer you tumble from skies of radiant blue
I take your hand and twirl with you
Love that.
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‘buttercup hues of daffodil days’ – exquisite image.
Love the melting beauty of this poem.
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I so much love the joyful summer here… Love to run with warmth.
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Oh wow, what you’ve done with this is outstanding! The rooster… summer tumbling… just exquisite!
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Thank you
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This is so lovely, what a wonderful ode to summer, it makes me feel very happy and hopeful,,,
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Beautiful i shape, tone, imagery, motifs… Love the idea of summer tumbling from the heavens, like a rain of light–warm, nourishing to soul and skin, alive. Just beautiful, Debi. ♥
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Thanks
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Love the Fib form, and you’ve done it great justice.
Love this, especially:
“ah, summer you tumble from skies of radiant blue
I take your hand and twirl with you”
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Thanks De
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What a delight to read!
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this is so lovely Debi, beautifully written.
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Thank you, Michael
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How beautifully expressive this poem was.
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“I take your hand and twirl with you”….oh Debi i also had a dance with a fire bird…
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Lovely response
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Such a delight to imagine oneself in the scene you have described.
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What a glorious way to greet/celebrate morning
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Such a beautiful and delightful poem 🙂
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What a joyful poem – buttercup hues of daffodil days – what could be better
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Oh Debi this poem is glorious…I felt like twirling in the rays of the first sun’s rays….a child again dancing in the dawn of the day!
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Thank you
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