Summer Morn

Posted: April 15, 2016 in Uncategorized

Poem for imaginarygardens and adasofsunny   “Fibonnaci” and “Sunshine”

 

a
drop
a drop
glorious
amber clarity
falling aslant on dusty trees
awaking the rooster, “get up, get up, start this day”
he demands then preens himself in sun’s warm rays of buttercup hues of daffodil days
ah, summer you tumble from skies of radiant blue
I take your hand and twirl with you
an early morning
blessed with drops
amber
tinged
gems

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Comments
  1. Sanaa Rizvi says:

    Whistles!!! 😀 oh my goodness Debi this is so very beautiful! I am literally in awe of your fantastic execution of the Fibonnaci form 😀 thank you so much for participating at Prompt Nights.

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  2. This is magic, Debi!! I love this line:

    ” summer you tumble from skies of radiant blue”

    the entirety feels like a generous dance!

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  3. Marian says:

    Ah, perfect couplet!!

    ah, summer you tumble from skies of radiant blue
    I take your hand and twirl with you

    Love that.

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  4. ‘buttercup hues of daffodil days’ – exquisite image.
    Love the melting beauty of this poem.

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  5. I so much love the joyful summer here… Love to run with warmth.

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  6. Raivenne says:

    Oh wow, what you’ve done with this is outstanding! The rooster… summer tumbling… just exquisite!

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  7. elleceef says:

    This is so lovely, what a wonderful ode to summer, it makes me feel very happy and hopeful,,,

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  8. Beautiful i shape, tone, imagery, motifs… Love the idea of summer tumbling from the heavens, like a rain of light–warm, nourishing to soul and skin, alive. Just beautiful, Debi. ♥

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  9. whimsygizmo says:

    Love the Fib form, and you’ve done it great justice.
    Love this, especially:
    “ah, summer you tumble from skies of radiant blue
    I take your hand and twirl with you”

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  10. Rosemary Nissen-Wade says:

    What a delight to read!

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  11. this is so lovely Debi, beautifully written.

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  12. oldegg says:

    How beautifully expressive this poem was.

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  13. Sumana Roy says:

    “I take your hand and twirl with you”….oh Debi i also had a dance with a fire bird…

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  14. Kerry O'Connor says:

    Such a delight to imagine oneself in the scene you have described.

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  15. What a glorious way to greet/celebrate morning

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  16. Such a beautiful and delightful poem 🙂

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  17. Jae Rose says:

    What a joyful poem – buttercup hues of daffodil days – what could be better

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  18. Oh Debi this poem is glorious…I felt like twirling in the rays of the first sun’s rays….a child again dancing in the dawn of the day!

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