Medicine Woman

Posted: April 24, 2016 in Uncategorized

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So your challenge today.

  • Create a couple of new compound nouns. let them be memorable by funny or lyrical, maybe even cryptic.
  • Use these new compound nouns to create a poem on any topic you like. You might even want to write it on a challenge you have missed.

 

 

Her eyes were big O’s
with spider-leg lashes
all elbows and knees
loping through tall grasses
hair rising behind
like ravens aflutter.
She was an antelope-child,
suncrested-warbler,
huntress of healing,
root-binder,
plant-shaman
with aloe-hands
and feverfew-lips.
Caring for the weak
and soothing the sick.
 

 

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Comments
  1. Oh yes… this is exactly what I wanted to see… to me the whole poem gets such strength by being written in past tense leaving me wondering what she is today… Thank you for taking the challenge

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  2. Sanaa Rizvi says:

    Love, love, love this Debi 😀 no doubt amongst many other things a woman is first and foremost a nurturer 🙂 Beautifully penned.

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  3. Rommy says:

    This is just so rich with imagery. You nailed this challenge.

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  4. Kerry O'Connor says:

    I cannot choose which kenning I like the most – they are all so imaginative and add dimension to your portrait of the medicine-woman.

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  5. whimsygizmo says:

    LOVE this:
    “spider-leg lashes”
    and “fever-few lips.”
    Fantastic.

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  6. Such a descriptive portrait of a shaman healer. Your myriad kennings add vitality.

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  7. spider-leg lashes…a healing woman…Oh, can I call her? beautiful

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  8. Rosemary Nissen-Wade says:

    Excellently done.

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  9. LOVE your compounds and your choice of topic…enchanting and intriguing character…especially love the way you described her hair!

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  10. Bekkie says:

    Stunning Debi! I can see the contrast between old kennings and new by reading this.

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