Posted: March 16, 2016 in Uncategorized

mindlovemisery Heeding Haiku With Chèvrefeuille

Here is that little story: (Your task for this week’s Heeding Haiku With is to write a haiku inspired on this little story I have told you.)

Imagine: A walk through the forest on a summer day. Birds are praising their Creator with their fragile voices. A warm breeze caresses the leaves, bringing them to a higher level of consciousness. Their rustling makes you relaxed and one with nature. Far away sounds of traffic making your experience even better. Then you walk onto a bright sunny spot in the heart of the forest, a plain spot of grass mixed with all kinds of colorful (field) flowers and there in the middle of that spot, you find a crystal clear pool with the most beautiful colored water-lilies. As you walk closer to the crystal clear pool you see a pair of deer. “Wow”, you think. “What a surprise”.

Woodsy cathedral
two deer by pellucid pool


Sudden clearing
water lilies on crystal pool
two deer unafraid


  1. julespaige says:

    Very calm scenes. 🙂

    (New word for me ‘pellucid’.)

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  2. Miss Stacy says:

    the woods as a cathedral…what a lovely metaphor. love this haiku.

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  3. It was serendipity, huh? Beautiful!

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  4. thorsaurus says:

    One word, five syllables. Perfect. 🙂


  5. Rommy says:

    I’ve had lovely surprises like that as well. It’s a charming piece in every sense of the word.

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