Love Stages

Posted: February 12, 2016 in Uncategorized

Read My Mindmindlovemisery Music Prompt #29 “Read My Mind” by The Killers
“Use the song Read My Mindas inspiration for any form of creative expression”

 

It flames into a bonfire when it’s young
heat so intense you step back from it
at risk of being singed. Yet you can’t
stay on the fringe it draws you in
feeds on itself surging even higher.
If it stayed like this there’d be nothing
left but two shadows baked on the wall
And that is love.

And if you persevere to keep the fire going
you may find it settles to a steady flame
edges disheveled as you rake them in
to the middle and it flares here and there
with sparks that tumble upwards
on waves of heat released unleased
from the heart of the fire desire.
And that is love.

Till finally, the fire smolders, gives off
an even heat, comfy, snuggly, sweet
wrap your arms around me replete
in the coal’s steady glow. Now and then,
a kernel pops, a flame erupts and sizzles,
frizzles, sated with a sigh of bliss.
Holding hands, soft nuzzle and kiss.
And that is love.

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Comments
  1. What a beautiful description of the passion, pleasure, and comfort of love.
    This is a valentine to love itself.

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  2. Sanaa Rizvi says:

    Such a gorgeous write 🙂

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  3. Sonya Kassam says:

    Loved how you described the stages of love, in particular:
    “If it stayed like this there’d be nothing
    left but two shadows baked on the wall”
    Wow!

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  4. I smiled by the end of this. You write so delicately and gracefully. Happy Valentine’s.

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  5. Rallentanda says:

    Made me smile.All the stages of love beautifully expressed. Happy Valentines Day !

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  6. gillena says:

    a very passionate write
    Happy St Valentines Day

    much love…

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  7. Sumana Roy says:

    true true…and the tamed flame…blissful indeed…happy valentine’s day 🙂

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  8. Jae Rose says:

    What a great analogy – love can be all of those things..you have crystallised the stages perfectly

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  9. I love how you move beyond the initial stage of fire in your metaphor to embrace deeper, more profound states of love.

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  10. ghostmmnc says:

    Wonderful descriptions of the senses, with the heat, flames, sizzle, and smolder of the fire, and how it evolves just as their love does over time. 🙂

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  11. Victoria says:

    This echoes the emotion of my own…it is that love that lasts that is strong and enduring. (mine is on my second blog, not my poetry blog)

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  12. sreejaharikrishnan says:

    Wonderful…how else can one write on love…great!

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  13. The fire imagery works so well. How real the smouldering! I had to deal with smouldering and smoke last night!

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