Off Script

Posted: January 16, 2016 in Uncategorized

mindlovemisery B&P Shadorma & Beyond – Distillation prompt by Paloma
In response to Robert Herrick’s poem, “Delight in Disorder”


It’s too pat
the roses and wine
fancy dress
high-heeled shoes
passions turn on a thin dime
it feels staged to me.

Impromptu picnic
grabbed some chianti and cheese
sipped some wine
missed my mouth
you licked my chin, neck
passion flamed.

[A shadorma is a non-rhyming six-line poem with a syllable count of 3/5/3/3/7/5.]
I did one then the second I turned upside-down


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