February Blues

Posted: January 7, 2016 in Uncategorized

My favorite song by Rosemary Clooney
(Yes, that’s George’s Aunt)

 Sharing with adashofsunny prompt by Sanaa Rizvi
“Hello and welcome to another exciting round of our most awaited segment “On Popular Demand.” Music is something which binds us together. It causes two people to share an emotion so strong that it can hardly be put into words…  pick a favourite song of your own choice and to go wild.”

 

February, cold and bleak, snow fell last week
white, spangled… now smudged, trampled
like my heart. Trusting you wasn’t smart.
Valentine’s Day came and went, I spent
it alone, hoping the phone would ring
I’d hear someone say, “hey, love ya, babe”
but my hope was dashed and I felt like trash
discarded, disdained, restrained by the bonds
of a love gone wrong from the start.

February, I’m looking for you to end, tend
to days of grey and leave me alone. Don’t play
cat and mouse with my heart, you’ve been a part
of my life for too long. You’ve sung your sad song,
you can’t stay. Let March zip away, then April and May
come springing in. Let the birds croon a sweet tune
and the sun melt the ice I’ve felt the winter long, oh,
send me a guy, with stars in his eyes, just for me.
Then month number two I’ll relent and pardon you.

 

 

First written for: imaginarygarden LISTEN * ENJOY * BE INSPIRED * WRITE Imagined By Marian
“February” performed live by the incomparable Dar Williams Here

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Comments
  1. Helen Dehner says:

    Sing it, Debi! We hear ya ….

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  2. Kerry O'Connor says:

    You created a soulful rhythm with your careful use of internal rhyme. I can easily imagine these words being put to music.

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  3. Marian says:

    Yeah baby! The rhyming here is just great. Kick that month and everything associated with it to the curb.

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  4. You really mirrored the sadness of the month in your song… great internal rhymes and rhythm…

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  5. this was quite catchy. maybe a little sad because of the feeling of unrequited love but well written.
    enjoyed

    gracias for sharing

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  6. Ah. That’s such a lyrical write… I can hear your words being sung. You capture the melancholic tone of the song really well. Well-penned. 🙂
    -HA

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  7. Sherry Marr says:

    This was fun to read….cool write!

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  8. margaret says:

    pardoned February! I love this – wonderful What a sexy voice she has – thought she was Monroe for a second.

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  9. What killer pauses! And your comparisons go right for the heart. I love that even after all the hurt, the speaker doesn’t lose hope. She knows (she wants) that eventually, as the seasons pass, her time will come… bringing her those eyes.

    Lots of soul and yum. ♥

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  10. February doesn’t always come with a pink glow…This is bluesy pain…love it!

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  11. Sanaa Rizvi says:

    I love the choice of song and gosh you went all the way with this one 😀 its amazing how much emotion you can weave and that too so beautifully. Thank you so much for participating Debi 🙂

    Lots of love,
    Sanaa

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  12. Go to March and the guy will appear! Sad but wonderful song debi!

    Hank

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  13. Rall says:

    Great lyrics you have written. Ella Fitzgerald style voice would sing this well. Love it !

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  14. Now I have that wonderful song in my head…every year White Christmas makes its way into our home. You really captured the essence of February.

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  15. Jae Rose says:

    The harsh cold of being alone certainly sings in this wonderful poem – oddly i find spring harder – keeping up we cheery people when you’re feeling blue can be an extra effort

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  16. Our love lives Debi seem to be at the mercy of hope but we cling on for all we are worth. Such a well written poem.

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  17. Oh, I love this. And you’ve done such a great job of including some of the lyrics from the song in your own unique piece. I do love the movie that song came from as well.

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  18. Sonya Kassam says:

    Loved the song as well as the poem.

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  19. Jamztoma says:

    Yay! this was fun, witty, and charming! I like it ALOT. thanks for sharing it. may you find someone you’ve always dreamed of your whole life. Cheers!

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